Dear folks, now i say thank you to come in our blog. Today i wanna try to writing poem on english language. Even i don't know so much about english or britain culture.
But allow me to try that now :))
Oh and it is just experimental thing, and we open minded to critisize or mention and i say thank you.
Wide i feel it
suddenly my mind fear to
touching it
The wind blows slowly as
we passing the darker days
but it's joyful
i let in sunbeam entering window
morning left with biggest smile
i've ever know
That is as example today or this night. maybe we can taking some analysis or just ignoring it. Poem just doing itself, different to song which built by all of listener.
you can do better or best maybe
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